For Hope's grammar assignment yesterday, she was asked to write a story about the picture below. It was so enjoyable to read I thought I would share it. I was impressed with how few spelling mistakes she had! I didn't include those, but I did leave the rest of the story as she wrote it with no other modifications. She did a wonderful job. If you read it, leave me a comment and I will make sure she gets it. Thanks!
The Ink Splatter
"Susy, Anna, why don't you go work on your play!" "OK Mom!" they called back. "Alright Anna, I'll go get the costumes from the shed. And I will get a quill for the script!" So the girls went off to get the quill and the costumes. Anna skipped into the room with braids flying and a quill in her hand. She sighed. "Susy isn't here yet!" she said in sort of a whine. She hopped around the room waiting for Susan. Soon Susan came in the room with a basket. "Finally!" exclaimed Anna. "Actually, I barely even left, and here I got us some ink." She set it on the table and started to sort out the costumes. Anna sat down by the ink. "Susy do you know-" SPLAT! Anna knocked the ink bottle over. Susan quickly grabbed it and put it right side up. "It's OK Anna, accidents happen." She grabbed a towel for both of them. After cleaning, they practiced for a bit then decided to go outside and play tag. "I'm it!" said Anna.
The End!
Love her story. I especially liked how she gave a visual impression when she said that "Anna skipped into the room with braids flying....." I could picture her doing that in my mind.
ReplyDeleteGood job, Hope! That was great!
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